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Part I. Writing a Paragraph/ 11
Lesson 1: Structure of a Paragraph/ 13
1. What is a Paragraph?
2. Structure of a Paragraph
Writing Exercise
Lesson 2: Narrowing the Topic and Writing a Topic Sentence/ 25
1. Narrowing the Topic
2. Topic and Controlling Idea
Writing Exercise
Lesson 3: Body of a Paragraph/ 37
1. Creating Ideas
2. Selecting/Dropping/Arranging Ideas
3. Paragraph Unity
Writing Exercise
Lesson 4: Organizing a Paragraph/ 51
1. Time Order
2. Emphatic Order(Order of Importance)
3. Space Order
Writing Exercise
Lesson 5: Paragraph Planning/ 63
1. Linear Diagramming
Writing Exercise 1
2. Continuous Timed Writing
Writing Exercise 2
Lesson 6: Editing and Revising/ 73
1. Adding Ideas
2. Removing Unnecessary or Irrelevant Ideas
3. Rewording
4. Reordering
5. Proofreading
Writing Exercise
Lesson 7: Effective Sentence Structure/ 91
1. Varying Sentence Structure
2. Sentence Combining
Writing Exercise
Lesson 8: Use of Effective Language/ 111
1. Use of Descriptive Adjectives
2. Use of Descriptive Verbs
3. Use of Active and Passive Voice
4. Parallel Structure
Writing Exercise
Part II. Writing an Essay
Lesson 9: Structure of an Essay/ 129
1. Introductory Paragraph
2. Body Paragraphs
3. Conclusion
Writing Exercise
Lesson 10: Developing a Thesis/ 141
1. What is a Thesis?
2. Limiting a Topic
3. Writing a Thesis Statement
4. Supporting the Thesis with Specific Ideas
Writing Exercise
Lesson 11: Introduction and Conclusion/ 157
1. Writing an Introductory Paragraph
2. Six Ways of Writing an Introductory Paragraph
3. Three Ways of Writing a Concluding Paragraph
Writing Exercise
Lesson 12: Connecting Ideas with Transitions/ 167
1. Transitions
2. Transitional Sentences
Writing Exercise
Lesson 13: Persuasive/Argumentative Essay ? Part 1/ 179
1. What is Persuasion?
2. Methods of Persuasion
Writing Exercise
Lesson 14: Persuasive/Argumentative Essay ? Part 2/ 189
1. Strategies for Argumentation
2. Indicating Awareness of the Opposing Opinion
Writing Exercise
Lesson 15: Cause and Effect Essay/ 201
1. Writing a Cause and Effect Paragraph
Writing Exercise - Paragraphs
2. Developing a Cause and Effect Essay
Writing Exercise
Lesson 16: Definition Essay/ 217
1. Types of Definition
Writing Exercise
Lesson 17: Division and Classification Essay/ 227
1. What is Classification?
2. Guidelines for Division/Classification Essay
Writing Exercise
Lesson 18: Comparison and Contrast Essay/ 237
1. Contrast Paragraph
2. Comparison Paragraph
3. Comparison-Contrast Paragraph
4. Developing a Comparison or Contrast Essay
Writing Exercise
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