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  2007.6.30

This man, Hal is a great man. He is always live, and he has many job. But this book is very terrible. This has blood, and die. I think, children will can't see this book.


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2007. 6. 30    My English diary 

Today I'm very happy. Because Today in school, I have a magic show. my friends is surprise, and I am very glad. Magic is very funny! And my teacher giving a delicious fruit. School is very funny place!






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